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Petal, petal in the wind
Through the air it does descend
On the ground, in the grass
Much more deadly than a piece of glass.
Fluttering quickly through the air
My hated enemy can only stare
As it slices him to bits
His arm it cuts, his throat it slits
Blood pouring fatally fast
From this petal sharper than glass.
:iconlosttothehoping:
Hiya! I've invented a new tribute! Hope you like!
It was actually inspired by :iconjiuge:'s pic [link]
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:iconhiyonori-yumiko:
Nice job, its pretty cool :D
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:iconlosttothehoping:
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!
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:iconhiyonori-yumiko:
Thanks for faving Byakuya and Ruki :D
No prob :D
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:iconhiyonori-yumiko:
No prob! :D
Senbon somehow reminds me of Gakupo in Volcaloids...
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=star-blazer Aug 31, 2008  Professional Writer
Really good^^
I like the fact that you rhymed it without a "sing-songy" type of rhyme, and the visuals were great.
Nice job.
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:iconlosttothehoping:
Thanks! I love pleasing my fans. In all honesty, though, it seemed to pop up in my head and wouldn't go away until I posted it... Ha ha.
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